Editorial & Proofreading Services

Before your story reaches the world, let’s make sure it’s clean, clear, and unforgettable. Whether you’re submitting, self-publishing, or just polishing, our feedback is strategic, writer-first, and grounded in care.

Why Our Editorial Support Works

More than edits.
We help you understand your story.

  • Strategic, not surface-level — we go beyond grammar to help your story land harder.
  • Respect for your voice — we don’t rewrite your work. We refine what’s already powerful.
  • Emotional clarity — we’ll point out what feels off, not just what’s technically wrong.
  • Built for growth — our support is meant to sharpen your current piece and your long-term skill.

We meet your story where it is—then help it level up.

We’re here to bring clarity, intention, and care to your draft.

Line-Level Precision

We catch what’s dragging down your rhythm—wordy lines, stiff dialogue, awkward pacing—and help you smooth it out without losing your tone.

POV & Voice Checks

Not sure if your perspective is working? We spot inconsistencies and help strengthen your narrative presence.

Narrative & Structure Support

Get feedback on your story’s shape, momentum, and emotional progression—where it’s hitting, and where it needs a push.

Clarity Without Compromise

You keep your voice.

We just strip away what’s fogging it up—so your story can land clean, strong, and unforgettable.

Choose the editorial support that fits your draft.

From quick checkups to deep-dives—
find the service your story needs now.

Mini Story Checkup

₱1,500

A light but focused checkup for early chapters or short pieces (up to 5,000 words).

  • Tone, flow, and POV check
  • Key inline insights
  • 1-page feedback letter
Story Sync Session

₱3,000

For up to 15,000 words. Best for authors midway through revision or with a finished novella.

  • Inline comments
  • Structure, pacing, character notes
  • 2-page critique summary
Deep Dive Reviews

₱6,000+

For manuscripts up to 35,000 words. (Custom quotes for longer works.)

  • Full editorial letter (2–4 pages)
  • Voice, structure, and flow analysis
  • Chapter-by-chapter in-text feedback
PROOFREADING

₱1/word

A careful final pass before you publish, pitch, or proudly share your work.

  • Grammar & punctuation
  • Sentence-level clarity
  • For clean, almost-ready drafts

Two Editors. One Goal: A Better Story.

Each story is different—and so is each editor. Get to know our editorial styles so you can choose the right fit for your voice, your goals, and where you are in the writing process.

Mariel Leister

EDITOR

I specialize in helping authors shape their work with emotional precision and structural clarity. If you’ve got a story with real stakes, real depth, and you’re tired of surface-level feedback, I’m your girl.

I offer honest, strategic critiques with the aim of one thing: making your story unforgettable. No fluff. No sugarcoating. Just insight that pushes you to grow—without losing your voice.

I believe in respecting your potential enough to give you real feedback. I’ll point out what’s working, what’s getting in the way, and how to bring your ideas to life without losing what makes them yours.

Pasta Garcia

EDITOR

I help authors bring their words to life with care, clarity, and emotional resonance.

If your story carries something true at its core and you want it nurtured—not nitpicked—I’m here for the slow, intentional work of helping it shine.
My edits are thoughtful, kind, and precise. I won’t rewrite your voice—I’ll help you trust it more.

No harsh red ink. Just clear, compassionate guidance to bring you closer to what you really meant to say. Whatever you’re building—if it’s honest, tender, or quietly brave—I’m with you all the way.

Ready to move forward?

We don’t do rushed forms or bot replies.
Send us an email—your story deserves more than a dropdown menu.

– Your name + a short intro
– The service you’re interested in (Mini Story Checkup, Story Sync, etc.)
– The editor you’d like to work with (Mariel or Pasta)
– A short description of your manuscript (genre, status, vibe)
– A 1,000–2,000 word sample (.doc/.docx only—no PDFs please)

📬 services@alontala.com

Subject Line Format:
Editorial Inquiry – [Service You’re Interested In]
Example: Editorial Inquiry – Deep Dive Review

If your project feels like a good fit, we’ll send you:
– A custom proposal
– Rate confirmation
– Estimated timeline
Once you’re happy and payment is confirmed, we’re good to go.

Roughly 5–10 business days depending on service and word count.
Larger critiques may take up to 2–3 weeks. We’ll confirm that before starting.

We currently accept the following methods:

💸 GCash or Maya
🏦 Bank Transfer (BPI)
💳 Credit/Debit via PayPal (with additional processing fee)

Payment details will be shared after we confirm your slot.
Once payment is received, your project is officially booked.

Send us your sample anyway—we’ll guide you.